Once upon a time there was a house and in that house there was a book and in that book was nightmares that would scare your brains out, no one has been in that house and i don’t think anyone will...
I woke up and got up but i saw something past my house they were coming in and they knocked on the door “ hello anyone home “ she said, when i heard her i ran to get under my bed but then she opened the door, i was freaking out she went and looked in each door but she couldn’t see anyone and then she said “ i know you’re hiding “ i screamed and she heard me so she went into the room and looked under the bed “ aha “ she said in a very horrifying voice i said “ hello, who are you “ “ i am the person going to kill you “ she said i screamed but i stopped i remembered that i was playing before with my BB gun i will get it out
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteCool story I like it, but maybe next time use paragraphs.
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